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Thrawn’s gaze was turned toward the Calamari artwork, his head tilted slightly to the right.  He was silent for a long time.

When Parck started to fidget, he spoke.

“You lost three Dreadnoughts.”

The Captain flushed.  “Sir.”

“One Victory-class Star Destroyer.”

He wanted to die.  “Sir.”

“Fifteen TIE squadrons.”

He might get his wish.  “Sir.”

“And one Interdictor Cruiser.”

Parck bit back a groan.  “Sir,” he whispered.

“I’m sorry?  I didn’t hear you?”

The human took a deep breath and let it out slowly.  “Sir,” he repeated, louder.

“And that means what, precisely?”

Park’s jaw hurt from clenching it so tight.  “I lost almost everything we went in with, Sir,” he grated out.  He forced his hands to relax; a trip to Medical wasn’t on his list of things to do today.

“Ninety-five percent of your task force was completely wiped out.”

Dieing might be.  “Yes, Sir,” he sighed, shoulders finally slumping with defeat.

“You admit defeat, then?”

It hurt to admit it.  “Yes, Sir.”

“Then I suppose there is really only one end to this meeting.”

Parck wondered if his punishment would be painless.  He doubted it.  “I understand, Sir.”

Thrawn finally turned to him, a slight smile playing on his lips.  He reached across the table and flicked a switch; above them, icons denoting commander and commanded switched places.

“You, Captain, have just been demoted.”

There was no mistaking the pleasure in the alien’s voice; it was the fifth time in  row that he’d completely swabbed the deck with Parck, and it was a stupid children’s game, at that.

He was never going to live this down.
Star Wars fanfiction, this time!

For the loverly whooping-llama, because I told her I'd write her a fic, and she wanted me to write Thrawn demoting Parck.

So I did.

You never specified the setting.

Thrawn & Parck © Zahn & Lucas
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cat885 Featured By Owner May 14, 2010
Love it!!! And would totally love more!
Evolvana Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2009   Digital Artist
Very good fanfiction :) We sense all the tension of the scene.
Brittcheska Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2009
Thrawn fanfiction, and clever Thrawn fanfiction at that! Very nice!
whooping-llama Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2007
Harumph! It's fan-dabby-dozey! :D
whooping-llama Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2007
HAHA! I heart it nonetheless! :D
LarissaFae Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2007
You so only said no sex! And I was exhausted!

I'll make it up to you.

And I'm glad you luffed it. :kiss:
whooping-llama Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
Haha, but I totally loved the story missus! :D
LarissaFae Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
Which is as it should be. :hug:
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